Yeh Bi Muhabat Hi Hain (COMPLETED)

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is story koo Rakaa ne preview kiya thaa exbii (Xossip) pr. he was one of the best to give kahani previews. posting his preview here.

Preview from Rakaa:

"Wow". You know how it feels when you read a kahani more than once and it's still as touching as the first wakt reading?

That's about all I could muster at the end of the kahani (embarrassingly, between a flood of tears - after all, a guy isn't allowed to cry, right?) I must admit - my skepticism was extremely high upon first hearing about this kahani. That's this kahani!

It iss so khubsurat. All the things that love embodies iss what this kahani iss about. Laughter, tears joy, and pain. Love changes us. It makes us better. I queried myself as to the necessity of reading yet another "teenage love kahani". However, upon a friend's recommendation (Shah Bhai), I decided to give it a go, and realized that I had actually come close to making a terribly big mistake in my life had I not read it. This kahani iss simply INCREDIBLE!

This kahani shows how Aisha kindness and love for Aaryan helped him to be more than he thought he could be. Aaryan's love for Aisha gave her peace with her life. Aaryan and Aisha were perfect fits for their characters. It wasn't overdone at all. I am very pleased with their performances.

Yeh Bhi pyar hain will be a kahani that will be part of my library for years to come. And iss one that I have and will continue to revisit. Aaryan does an excellent portrayal of his school and colz image, and his desire to be popular and cool surely strike a chord in many of our hearts.

After all, during our precocious teenage years, there are arguably few things that are more important than being cool and universally liked by peers. One's self esteem iss invariably tied with how others perceive us. And so that iss how Aaryan iss, until he meets sweet Aisha, the local preacher's daughter. Aisha lends her character a huge amount of depth and surrounds her with an innocent, heartwarming aura, so much so that by the end of the kahani, she can do no wrong.

As you watch their relationship blossom throughout the kahani, your own feelings are inextricably linked and you find yourself cheering the couple on, marveling at their sweet times spent together and secretly envious of the intense love that they have discovered. For guys, I warn you - Aisha iss so incredibly pure and unselfish that she will have your hearts fluttering by the end of the kahani.

As for Aaryan, he will no doubt reside in many girls' dreams for months to come, and he demonstrates a type of love that transcends ordinary levels, completing Aisha's life in each and every way. He shows her a love that she has not experienced before, and she helps him to discover himself and fills him with a desire to achieve higher things in life. There iss a lot of hidden depth, and even when Aaryan fulfils Aisha's first and foremost desire (which I shall not reveal for those that have not read the kahani), he says it in such an unselfish way that it evokes true admiration of his love for her. By being together, they have both achieved things that were previously not possible.

By the end of the kahani, the viewer's faith in love and everything pure and good iss restored to unshakeable heights. Love iss truly the most powerful emotion known to mankind, and this heartwarming kahani reminds us that despite the challenges we face on a daily basis, there are things in life that make the experience truly worth it.

To be able to witness the kind of love that Aisha and Aaryan shared iss truly unforgettable, and as Aaryan says during the kahani, "We had more happiness than most people experience in a lifetime." Yeh Bhi pyar hain iss a truly moving kahani that urges us to have faith in true love and to cherish all the wonderful things that we have in our lives.

This kahani isn't like other teen kahaniya, it has a heart and it's ending will no doubt bring you to tears. I definitely recommend the kahani to anyone who loves love kahaniya. I promise you won't be disappointed.

Cheers,

Raaka.

Aaryan ek teyiss year kaa larka thaa. Woh bahot hi sentimental kissam kaa thaa or ziada hi jazbaati thaa. but dimaagh kaa bahot garam bhi thaa woh. Lamba kad, 6ft2inches, gora rang, mazboot jism, taakatwar, or beautiful bhi thaa woh. Bilkool hero. Teyis year k har larkon kaa koyi na koyi ishk kaa chakar to hote hain. To kia Aaryan k zindagi mein koyi thaa?

Chalo dekhtey hein.

Aaryan k pita k do bhai the. Ek bara or ek uske pita se chota. Jahan Aaryan rehta thaa, uss k donon chacha uss k paroshi bhi the. Aaryan kaa ghr bich mein thaa or donon taraf, bagal mein do chacha k ghr the. Voh sheher k kuch hi doorie pr rehta thaa. Jahan who rehta thaa uss k donon taraf do cities the, ek uss k purab mein or ek paschim mein. Purab wale sheher keval(only) 10 kms ki doorie pr thaa or paschim wale sheher keval(only) 3 kms ki doorie pr.

Ab jahan who rehta thaa, wahan kaa mukhya raasta bahot hi vyast raha kartey the kyuke wahin se guzar kr donon taraf k shehron tak saari motar gadi, bss, trucks, motor cycles vaghaira guzartey the. mai ek sketch banata hoon jiss se aap logon koo vistaal purvak samajh mein ayega.

Sketch yeh raha:


Ab is sketch se aap logon koo pata chalega k kaun kahan rehta hain. Sketch koo dekh kr aap logon koo pata chalega k uss k dayein taraf uss kaa bara chacha kaa ghr hain, but bayein taraf ki makaan pr likha hain ‘Aisha’s house’ hain nah? To yeh Aisha kaun hain bhai?

Chalo ye bhi dekh lete hein.

Yeh Aisha, Aaryan kaa chota chacha ki beti hain. Ab aap log sketch pr yeh bhi dekheinguey, k kitna vyast mai road hain, uss mai road se hokar weh log apni lane mein atey hein fir apney apney ghr mein. Uss lane kaa naam hain Ranvheer lane kyunke Ranvheer Aaryan kaa family name hain, yani uss kaa surname hain. So, Aisha kaa bhi surname Ranvheer hi hain.

Ab in teenon bhaiyon mein bahot mohabbat thaa, teenon ek doosre k yahan atey jatey the, or teenon ghr k bachchey bhi aya jaya kartey the, jeise k teenon ghr teenon family k liye hoo. Ek k yahan kabhie koyi kaam hoo to teenon pariwaar k sabhi sadasya ek hi kaam waley ghr mein jamaa hoo jatey the. Jeise k kabhi koyi pooja vidhi kaa kaam hoo, ya mangni, ya vivah, ya kuch bhi hoo, sab ek saath juth jatey the.

Ab yeh joo Aaryan thaa, jab woh....... year kaa thaa, tab Aisha .......ki thi. Hamesha ki tarah, school se waapas aney k baad, Aaryan turanth Aisha k ghr pohonch jata thaa uss se cher chani karney, uss ki chachi ki bilkool aadat thi k Aaryan har roz ata hain or bachon k sath khelta hain. or yeh uske chacha koo bhi maloom thaa. Bachpan se Aaryan wahan jata thaa or apne chacha k bachon k sath khelta thaa. Aisha kaa ek bada bhai or ek choti behen bhi the. or Aaryan kaa ek bada bhai or 2 choti behnein thiin. Yani Aaryan apne paraviwaar kaa dusra awlad thaa.

Ab bachpan se har tarah k khel, cher chani houwa karta thaa…kabhi kabhi to larayi bhi hotey the bachchon mein, aapas mein jhagartey bhi the, or ammi(maa) dad se report bhi kartey the. but sab se bada chacha joo thaa uss ne sabhi awraton se, or bhaiyon se yeh ganbhirta k saath hukm diya thaa k kabhi bhi bachchon ki vajah se apnon mein koyi bhi anban nahin honi chahiye. Bachchey to bachchey hotey hein aaj jhagrey to kal fir ek hoo jatey hein.

Ab jab Aaryan ...... year kaa huwa thaa, to uss kaa man, Aisha ki taraf kuch ziada hi khincha jata thaa. Who uss koo bachpan se hi bahot passand karta thaa, or ussi k saath ziada time guzaarta thaa. Yeh sabhi koo pata thaa k Aaryan or Aisha ek dusrey k bina kabhi nahin rehtey. Yeh baat teenon gharon mein mashoor thaa. or teenon gharon k bachchey or parents bhi is baat se waakif the. but kabhi kissi ne na toka na danta, to Aaryan araam se aguey bahrta gyaa. bss ek shaam koo who Aisha k saath homeworks mein help kr raha thaa, or usney Aisha k kamar pr apna hath rakha, sehlaya, or dhirey se apna hath Aisha ki chaati pr phehra. Aisha khadi hokar Aaryan koo bahot zor se do thappar uske gaal pr marey. Aaryan kharey k kharey rehgaya, or usske enkhon se ensoo behney lage…… fir who apney sar nichey kiye huwe dhirey se apney ghr koo chal diye. Aisha keval(only) ..... year kit hi yeh tab ki batein hein. mai aap logon koo shuruwaat se story koo samjha raha hoon. Abhi to Aaryan teyiss year ki hein or mai aap logon koo tab ki baton se suna raha hoon.

To uss din Aaryan rotey huwe chup chap wahan se chala gyaa. Aisha khari reh gayi or usko afsos huwa k usney Aaryan koo kyun mara… who bhi baith kr roney lagi. ammi(maa) ne pucha kia huwa to kuch na boli, bss roti hi gayi. Udhar Aaryan apney kamrey mein bandh thaa……

Aisha .... year ki baali umr mein bahot hi khubsurat nikhri huwi thi. Uss k bahot hi khub surat baal the, jism to abhi abhi jawani koo hawa de rahi thi. Khub gori thi. or Aaryan to usko bachpan se chahta thaa. but Aisha koo pata nahin tah k Aaryan uss se mohabbat karta hain, who to har kissi ki tarah jeise khelti thi, batein karti thi veise hi Aaryan se bhi karti thi.


To be continued……….

Update 2



Doosrey din, School se aney k baad Aisha ghr pr har roz ki tarah Aaryan kaa intezaar kr rahi thi. Weise to har sham koo, school k wapas atey hi Aaryan Aisha k yahan dawrta huwa jata thaa, but is din Aisha intezaar karti rahi pr Aaryan kaa pata nahin thaa.

Aaryan ki choti behnon kaa naam Pooja or Anu the. Aisha ne Pooja koo apney yahan bulwaya or Aaryan ki samachar(news) puchchi. To Pooja ne kaha k Aaryan ghr pr hi hain or homeworks kr raha hain.

Tab Aisha roney lagi. Pooja koo taahjub huwa k Aisha kyun ro rahi hain or jaakar apni chachi se kaha. Jab Aisha ki ammi(maa) uss se puchney gayi k woh kyun ro rahai hain to Aisha ne zor zor se rotey huwe jawab diya k Aaryan uss se khafa hain issi liye woh wahan nahin aya. or uss ne batayi k kal donon mein jhagra huwa thaa. To Aisha ki ammi(maa) ne kaha agar Aaryan nahin ayaa to tum uss k ghr chaley jawo or apna rona dhona uss koo dikhawo. fir Pooja Aisha ki haath pakar kr ussko khinchtey huwe apney ghr ki aur lejaney lagi. Aisha rotey huwe Aaryan k yahan ponhchi Pooja k saath. Usske pyari pyari enkhon se moti moti ensoo tapak rahe the. or who siskiyan le rahi thi.


Aaryan apney kamrey mein chup chap baithe huwa thaa, apney homeworks k saath. Pooja Aaryan k kamrey mein daakhil huwi or kaha, “Bhaiya dekho to kaun aya hain!” Pichey murke Aaryan ne dekha to Aisha sissakti huwi Khari thi. Aaryan jaldi se daur kr uss k paas gyaa or usko bahon mein lekar pucha, “Kia huwa? Kyun ro rahi hoo is tarah? Kissi ne mara tumko?” To Aisha or zor zor se roney lagi. Aaryan ne uss k gaalon pr apna haath phertey huwe, ensoowon koo ponchtey huwe kaha, « Arey meri pyari si gudya koo kiss ne mara ? mai abhi usska samachar(news) leta hoon. Kaun hain woh jiss ne meri rani koo rulaya ? » Aisha koo ziada zor se rota huwa dekh kr Pooja hansney lagi or wahan se chali gayi.


Aaryan, Aisha koo apney god mein bithaya or, ussko sehlatey huwe poocha, « Bolo nah ? kia baat hain ? » To Aisha sisakti huwi boli, “Tum kyun aaj mere yahan nahin aye ?” To muskuratey huwe Aaryan ne jawab diya ,”Dekho kitna homeworks para hain! Buss issi liye” fir Aisha siskiyan koo sambhaltey huwe kaha, “Nahin, mujhey maloom hain, tum mujhse khafa hoo nah, is liye k kal mai ne tum koo thapad mara thaa?” To Aaryan ne kaha, “Ab choro kal ki baton koo, joo hoo gyaa so hoo gyaa.” To Aisha ne kaha, “Nahin pehley tum bolo k tum ne mujhey maaf kiya tab uss baat koo chorungi.” fir Aaryan ne ek lambi saans lekar kaha, “To tum ne kyun mujhey thapad mara thaa? Who bhi ek nahin do zordaar thapad?” Aisha simat kr dhimi awaaz mein boli, “To tum ne kyun mujhey weise chuwa thaa? Mujhey bilkool achca nahin laga or socha k tumharey vichaar gandey hein issi liye mere hath uth gaye tumpar.”

Uss time Aisha apni school uniform mein thi, or woh Aaryan ki god mein baithi thi, or uss kaa skirt ghutney ki upar tak thi, or Aaryan kaa haath, uski thik ghutney pr thaa. To Aaryan ne kaha, “is time maira(mera) haath tumharey ghutnon pr hain, or tumhare Jangh ki shuruwaat bhi dekh raha hoon, to kia tumko bura lag raha hain, or mere vichaar gandey lag rahe hein?” Tab Aisha, sar jhuka kr boli, “Nahin” To Aaryan ne kaha, “Dekho Aisha, mai tumko sabhi cousins mein sub se ziada chata hoon, mohabbat karta hoon tum se, uss time se jab tum bilkool choti thi. or kabhi bhi mere vichaar tumharey aur gandey nahin hoo saktey. Kyun k maira(mera) mohabbat tumharey liye sachcha hain or pavitra hain.”

Yeh sunkar Aisha ki hriday zor se dharka or, woh laal hogayi or sharma si gayi or Aaryan koo ek chota sa chumband uske gaalon pr dekar usske god se uthkar dawdtey huwe apni ghr waapas chali gayi.

Aaryan muskuraya or khamosh baithey reh gaye, yeh sochtey huwe k ab Aisha koo uss k mohabbat kaa pata chala or samajh mein aya.


To be continued………..