ghr kaa naqsha acche tarike se bataya hain.. or yeh batroom kaa kya Raaz hain dono taraf se khulne kaa..
Yetho time batayega batroom kaa raaz kya hain
or hero 1 week se kya kr raha thaa.. kahin maa(माँ) - bete honeymoon toh Ni mna rhe the.. jokes apart.. clear krna agle update mai..
Bhul gyaa maa(माँ) yahi ghr pe thi keval(only) raghav gyaa thaa agle nahee kareeb 50 update k baad
Anand toh fattu Nikla.. hero se darta hain.. or gay wali baat sahi toh nhi hain.. please yar yeh sab mat dikhana kahani mai..
Anand fattu nahee hain keval(only) hero k samne uski kuch nahee chlti vo kyu?saspence
aur kya bataya apne gay chiiii.....muze gay chudai(sex) bilkul pasand nahee yeh tho comedy k liye likhata mene
story kaa shirshak maa(माँ)-bete kaa Madhur Milan hain.. toh ek baat toh hain ki hero kaa Saumya k prati pyaar bilkul pure hoga or hero kahin bahar muh Ni marega... Anand ki mummy(मम्मी) kaa character bi dilchasp hoga.. may be positive hoo ya negative..
Anand ki mummy(मम्मी) charecter dilchasp hain aur positive bi yeh mene anand sing humare sajan ki writer koo dhyaan mai rakhte hue kahani likhi hain unke maa(माँ) k baare mai negetive kese bol sakta hu unki maa(माँ) aur meri maa(माँ) ek jaise hain manta hu mai so pls aage se anand k maa(माँ) k baare mai negetive mai likhunga aisa sochna bi mat
Chote chote updates k sath flow banaye rakhna kyunki Abhi story ki starting hain...
Mujse jitna ban sake utna tho likhunga baaki aap sabki uper hain
Gajab kaa update diya he bhai. To pehla update de diya. Achha thaa ghr kaa naksha bi bata diya. batroom kaa suspense bi daal diya. Dusra suspense ki Raghav ek hafte k liye bhahar gya thaa. Kaha gya thaa kyu gyaa yeh sab janane kenliye 50 updates kaa lamba intezar karna padega. maine socha thaa ki anand bhai koo vo police wale k ladke kaa role doge thada sa sarif bnaa k. halanki aapne unhe apna yaar bnaa liya. Agle update mai shayad us ladke ki entry bi karwaoge.
Waiting 4 next update
Update 2
maa(माँ) koo ghr chodne k baad raghu anand k ghr k liye nikal gyaa.
Yaha chotasa intro:-
Mamata:-anand ki maa(माँ) muze apne bete anand se bi jyada chahat karti hain pahle yelog humare ghr k baju hi rehte te per kuch karanvash yeh thoda darwaja aake rehne lage hain bachpan mai ek bi aisa din nahee thaa ki inki hath mene khana na khaya hoo
Payal:-choti bachi hain abhi 5th mai padti hain bahuti natkat hain raghav bhaiya aur anand bhaiya hi iski duniya hain aur raghav ki ek baat abhi tak nahee talti hain halaki anand ki koi baat nahee sunti apni maa(माँ) ki bi nahee sunti bahoot ziddi hain
Inka sohar ki sarkari noukari hain dusray shehar mai vo kabhi kabhi hi ate hain
Baki is ghr mai anand aur uski maa(माँ) aur behan koo chodke koi nahee
Tho mai darwaja k pass jake bell bajata tabi mere mobile pe kisi kaa call aya vo call thoda important thaa tho mai thoda darwaja ake baat karne laga thaa ki tabi mere peet mai koi kudne ki ahsaas huaa tho dekha tho payal thi
Payal:-bhaiya aap kaha chale gaye te ek week se aap nahee aye aap mujse chahat hi nahee karte javo mai apse baat nahee karti katti
Raghu:-ale ale mela bacha nalaz hogaye teek hain mai abhi aapse andar aake baat karta hu dekho bhaiya koo ek important call aya huaa hain bhaiya unse baat karke abhi ate hain tab tak aap andar bhaiya ki wait karo teek hain
Payal;-hmm teek hain bhaiya muze maira(mera) fevorite choclate chahiye
Raghu:-teek hain javo jao jaldi javoo
phir vo ander chali gyi aur mai phone pe baat karne laga
Raghu:-haa kahiye sir kya bnaa maira(mera) kaam
Phone se:----------------------
Raghu:-teek hain sir mai dekhloonga
Phone:-----------------
Raghu:-kya?teek hain unko maira(mera) aukat bi dikha deta hu rakhta hu
phir thodi der ayese hi baat huyi aur mai andar gyaa aur dekha ki anand gudiya koo manane mai laga huaa hain aur vo maan nahee rahi
Raghu:-(jeb se choclate nikalte huyi)kya huaa maira(mera) bacha abhi bi naraz hain mujse dekho mere hath mai kya hain
jb vo dekti hain maira(mera) hath mai kya hain tho doudke ati hain aur choclate lene lagti hain tho mai haath piche khinchne lagta hu
Raghu:-pahle muze maira(mera) gift chahiye
Payal:-teek hain aap juko
mai juka tho mere dono galompe pappi dedi tho mene usse uta k apne god mai leliya aur vo choclate khate hue bahoot chahak rahi ti.
mai usse utaye hue kitchan ki taraf gyaa thaa tabi ek awaaz ayi
Anand:-o hello mai bi hu yaha pe
Raghu:-tho mai kya karu tuje bi utana hain kya chal be hat
Anand:-are ayese ghr aya aur mujse baat kiye bina mile jaa raha hain
Raghu:-tu kahin kaa presidant hain joo tujse milke jana padega chal be sala dimaag kharaab naa kr
aur mai usko ignore karte hue mai kitchen mai gyaa tho vaha maaji khana bnaa rahi thi
mai jaake unke bagal mai khada hogaya vo apne kaam mai mast thi muze dekhke bi andekha kr rahi thi mai samaj gyaa abhi mamla thoda garam hain
Raghu:-gudiya mamma kya bnaa rahi hain
Payal:-bhaiya aaj na mamma ne apki fevorite rajma chawal aur gobi parota bnaa rahi hain
Raghu:-kya such mai kya maaji gudiya sahi keh rahi hain
Maaji:-hmm
Raghu samaj gyaa thaa ki mamla thoda nahee bahoot jyada garam hain tho vo
Raghu:-gudiya tu jaake apni bhai k saath khelo mai abhi aya
Tho vo chali gyi
Raghu piche se jaake maaji koo bahome bhar liya
Raghu:-kya huaa maa(माँ) itna kya narazagi mai ghr mai hi nahee thaa tho kese ata yaha kese milta aapse batav
Maaji:-chodo muze muze tumse koi baat nahee karni yaha nahee thaa tho 25000 karch karke yeh phone kyu li phenk dete kahin ab chodo muze
Raghu:-(maaji koo chodke gutnonpe baitke apne hath apne mai lagake )sorry maa(माँ) maaf nahee karegi pehli baar tho wrong kiyana pehli baar tho sab maaf kardete hain maa(माँ) tho har baar maaf karti hain kya is bete koo maaf nahee karegi(ankhonse thoda nami agayi thi)
maa(माँ) ne pahle tho nahee dekha jb usko chod diya tho uss taraf dekhi tho gutnome baitke kaan pakda huaa thaa aur ankhome ansu thaa Ankho mai ansu dekke maa(माँ) tadap gyi aur raghu koo utake apne seene se laga li vo bi rone lagi rote hue
Maaji:- kyu karta hain aisa ek phone tak nahee kr sakta thaa tuje pata haina anand se jyada tujse chahat karti hu tho phir phone karke maa(माँ) mai yaha sakushal hu khana bi khaliya hain bss itna tho bata sakta thaa kya itna bi wakt nahee thi vaha pe
Raghu:-muze maaf kardo maa(माँ) age se aisa nahee hoga apki kasam jabbi mai kahin jaavu apko jaroor call karunga ab tho maaf kardo me tho yaha khana khane aya thaa ab tho bahoot bhuk lag rahi hain
Maaji:- chal maaf kiya tu jaake bait abhi khana lagati hu uss nalayak koo bi bulale aur gudiya koo bi
phir raghu batroom jakar hath muh doke dining table pe aake bait gyaa aur sub logone khana khaya aur thodi der baat karke raghu ghr k liye nikal gyaa