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maa(माँ) koo mai kamre pe Lekar na tootne ki dilasa de Raha thaa ki Gajender jaisi haiwan se kese humlog Har sakte hai maa(माँ) ne isbar joo kaha vo toh chauka dene Wali baato this mere Liye

maa(माँ): Ha beta tune sahi kaha vo kisi haiwan se kaam nahee hai. Aab Hume uski kartoot ki sabak sikhana hoga. Ravi vo haiwan k sath mai kese baki mahine gujarungi samaj mai nahee Arahi hai. Aab toh muze uski sakal bi dekhne ki icha nahee hoti tere papa jaisi Sharif Admi k piche vo orat Laga rakhi hai kitni lajja(shame) ki baat hai

mai ek Acha mauka paya thaa maa(माँ) ki batose Aab muze yeh Jaan na thaa ki joo bi huwa maa(माँ) or Gajender ki beach yeh 5mahino mai vo maa(माँ) muze Sachi Sachi batati hai ya nahee mene kaha

R: maa(माँ) Aapko ish haiwan k sath baki mahine nahee gujarni padhegi vo idea hai Meri pass. Aap keval(only) yeh bataiye Kya Gajender Aapke sath Jabarjasti ya chedhkhani Karne ki kosis ki band kamre mai.mai janta Hoon maa(माँ) yeh sawal ek beta nahee karsakta Apni maa(माँ) se pr hmari family ki situation E aici hai ki Aapse Aisi baate puchna padh Raha hai.

mai maa(माँ) ki komal pith se Apni hat hata Chuka thaa or maa(माँ) Meri kandhe se. maa(माँ) ki Surat pe lajja(shame) or mayusi chahi huyi thi vo najre jhukai huyi chup thi. maa(माँ) ki Aici situation dekhkar mai phir bol para

R: maa(माँ) Apko lajja(shame) Arahi hai toh rehne dijye or mai Aisi sawal se Mafi chahata Hoon Aapse
phir maa(माँ) jhat se Meri taraf dekh kr boli

maa(माँ): Beta Aisi baate nahee hai TU kyun Mafi mangega. mai tumhari Tara Jawan bete ki maa(माँ) hote huye bi kisi paray mard se nikah ki yeh Kya koi Besharmi ki baat nahee hai

Ravi: pr maa(माँ) vo toh Meri taraf dekhkar Apne majboori se nikah ki or mai yeh bi janta Hoon ki coart ki nikah sambhog Bina thi

mai maa(माँ) se or khulna chahta thaa unka jaisi voli Surat thi woise Meri kamuk batose unki sakal pe ek Ajeeb si Rangat padhne Lagi joo Meri private part koo bi Akad dila Rahi thi phir Meri ish bato se maa(माँ) ne sakal jhukai Li

maa(माँ): Naajre jhukai kr boli Ravi vo baate kisne batai tuze

R: maa(माँ) jb mai jail se ghr Aaraha thaa toh papa k sath auto pe baitha thaa or Aap Gajender k sath

muze yeh seen dekhkar kafi gussa Laagi or mai Gajender koo Marne jaa Raha thaa toh papa ne batai k tumhari maa(माँ) ne shart rakhi hai

maa(माँ) kuch nahee boli keval(only) sunLi muze kiss se jankari Lagi
phir
maa(माँ): Ravi darasal Unhone ne Meri sath koi battamizi nahee ki or uski utna himmat kaha ki Meri sath Ganda saalug Kare. Beta tumhari paas Kon idea hai tune jikir kiya ki Gajender humse darwaja rahega baki mahine

Ravi: maa(माँ) Apko yaad hai Shiwani kaki jiski bete koo mai padha thaa thaa Gaon pe vo Abhi class 4pe hai isbar 5wi kaksa pe uthega.

maa(माँ): Ha yaad hai Ravi pr unse iska Kya Matlab

maa(माँ) puri baat toh pahle sunlo Shiwani kaki hamesa kehti thi Sahar bhejkar Apne bete koo padhaigi Agar mai usse yaha Le Aaya or 5wi kaksa pe join diladi or uski padhai pe help bi kardi toh Shiwani kaki kavi bi mana nahee karegi

or Aap Gajender se kehna ki papa ki bhaiya Ganeswar kaka ki bete koo mere pass padhne k Liye bhej rahe hai or Na papa na Aap ish baatko mana kr sakti hai

maa(माँ): Shiwani k bete koo yaha Laungi toh tumhari padhai pe dikkat hongi or 5mahine bachi hai tumhari final exam ki saabka ek sapna hai TU engineer bane. tumhari dadi Meri or papa ki bare pe soch beta kitna papad bele hai tumhari papa ne tumhari padhai k Liye

Ravi: maa(माँ) mai Apko wachan deta Hoon woisa kuch nahee hoga mai top Result Launga Aap dekhna. or yahi ek Rasta hain Gajender koo Apki kamre se nikalne kaa

maa(माँ): thik hai beta pr Gajender koo Akhir pata chal gyaa toh Ganeswar bhaiya k koi bete nahee hai

R: maa(माँ) Aap bi na etni darti hai Akhir usko Kon bataiga yeh baat ki kaka ki keval(only) ek beti hai pinky.Gajendar yaha rahega toh Gaon pe sabko batadega kaka ki beta . Aap bologi toh maan lega Gajender

maa(माँ): thik hai beta Aaj Raat hi bolungi

Ravi : nahee maa(माँ) hum kuch der baad hi nikal rahe hai Gaon k Liye phir sham se pahle Lautunga kisi koo bhanak bi nahee Lagegi hum maa(माँ) bete Laut kr Chala Aunga SahiL koo Lekar. Aap shamko Gajender koo bata Dena Meri phone se ki kaka or uske bete ghr Aai hai Aaj maat Aana puri baat kaal Gajender koo itminan se bata Dena Aap

maa(माँ) ki chehre ki Rawaiya uth chuki thi or mai janta thaa ki uski waja thi maa(माँ) ki gale ki manglsutraa joo chur chur hogai thi Gajender ki hato

maa(माँ): beta Unhone muze ek phone diye hai vo mai baxa pe rakhi hoon.muze toh chalana nahee Aata phir bi Jabarjasti de diye thaa

maa(माँ) Apko Gajender kab phone Lakar Diya

maa(माँ): kuch din pahle hi beta. Meri Gaon ki saheli log thik hi bolti thi jb beta bada hota hai toh maa(माँ) ki yaar banjata hai

mai: Ha maa(माँ) yeh toh Sach hai

maa(माँ) ne mujhse phone ki baat toh batai halanki kuchdin pahle Diya yeh baat wrong thi maa(माँ) ki. joo bi hoo Aab maa(माँ) shayad lajja(shame) se jhoot bol Rahi thi phir maa(माँ) ne joo kaha usko sunke muze kafi Acha Laga kyun ki maa(माँ) muze Aab yaar samaj Rahi thi or mai maa(माँ) koo kuch or

maa(माँ): Ravi ek anarth hogaya hai beta

mai:kyun maa(माँ) Kya huaa

maa(माँ): tu kisi koo batana mat beta. tumhari dadi ki di huyi manglsutraa toot gyaa hai. maa(माँ) khub afsos ki sath ish baat ki jikir ki

Ravi: maa(माँ) yeh kese huaa. Apki pass toh sab chiz hifazat se rehta hai or vo toh papa ki nikah ki nishani bi thi
mai maa(माँ) koo dilasa deta huaa kaha koi baat nahee toot Gai hai toh Aab Kya karna

maa(माँ): beta Gaon se wapas Aane k baad tumhari papa ki manglsutraa pehen ki thi isliye vo gusse se tod diye mai Kya karti bol Ravi

mai; Gajender hai woisa haiwan. Aap dhuki mat hona

maa(माँ): Aab Gaon jaane koo bol Raha hai tu mai manglsutraa ki Bina kese jaon Gaon. nahee toh tumhari dadi Meri Kya sthithi(condition) karegi tuze pata bi hai Ravi

Ravi: maa(माँ) Aap fikar na Kare tooti manglsutraa dijye Hume mai woise hi milakar Launga koi koo pata nahee chalega or thori na dadi Apki anchal sarka k manglsutraa check karegi Asli hai ya nakli

maa(माँ) ish baat se halki toh muskurai pr unki bechaini abhi bi kaam nahee huyi thi kyun ki Unhone mandir pe nikah wali baat abhi bi Hume nahee bataya thaa

maa(माँ) ne bed se uthi or baxa se vo papa ki tuti manglsutraa Meri hato pe Diya jb maa(माँ) muze manglsutraa de Rahi thi toh unki Ankho pe Ashu thaa or sath maa(माँ) vo mobile bi di or mujhse kahin

maa(माँ): Ravi yeh phone Diya hai tumhari dusman ne Jabarjasti

Ravi: kya maa(माँ) vo Apki dushman nahee hai

maa(माँ): Ha beta joo tumhara dushman vo maira(mera) dusman

maa(माँ) Aab chaliye Hume nikalna bi hai muze Bazar bi Jana hai manglsutraa dhundni hai

mai maa(माँ) se jaan na chahata thaa ki maa(माँ) Kya Gajender ki di sari pehenkar Gaon jaigi kyun ki maa(माँ) k pass 2hi new sari hai joo Gajender ne dilai thi

maa(माँ) Aap Apni sari nikal Lijye or jald hi Nahakar Ready hoo jaiye mai foran gyaa or Aaya Hume jald hi nikalna hai

maa(माँ): Ravi mai naye sari pehenkar nahee jaungi purani pehen Lungi thori na waha rukna hai Aaj e toh wapas Aungi

mai samaj gyaa maa(माँ) Gajender ki sari pehen na nahee chahti pr mai maa(माँ) koo purani sari mai Gaon nahee Lejana chahta maa(माँ) ki bi toh ek Arman hai

maa(माँ) toh buddi nahee hai ki joo Pai pehen kr chali Gai. vo ek susil khubsurat Nari thi or mai kaisa beta joo maa(माँ) koo ek naye sari nahee dila sakta. Asal pe Meri pass paise nahee rehta utna pr exam k baad jb mai engineering plan karunga tab paise ki koi kami nahee hongi

mai maa(माँ) se kaha

mai: Aap bi Meri sath chaliye

maa(माँ): nahee tu jaa

mai: chaliye na maa(माँ) Apki pasand ki ek jeans or ganji kharidunga. mai kapde kharid ne mai thak jata Hoon yeh toh Aap janti hai

maa(माँ) : Ha vo toh hai humesa bori Aisa kapda Lekar chala Aata hai pichne mai bi kafi dikkat hoti hai. Thik hai jaldi chal muze khana bi banana hai or Gaon bi Jana hai

mai maa(माँ) koo Meri Bahana se market k Liye razi toh karliya pr Meri maksad thi maa(माँ) koo Naye Sari dilana Meri pant genji toh ek Bahana thaa

maa(माँ) Sari k upar Apni body koo chadar se cover Karli or mujhse boli chal Ravi

mai toh maa(माँ) koo gate pr khadi karke taxi dhunde gyaa modh pe mai toh market k Liye maa(माँ) se bol Diya pr Meri Jeb pe 400Rs Rupiya hi bacha thaa

mai Apni yaar Dinesh koo call kiya ki 10hazar ki jarrorat hai vo university ki yaar o pe sabse Amir thaa toh Meri number pe paytm kardiya mai uske pass 2 din ki wakt Liya thaa wapas k Liye

mai taxi Lekar maa(माँ) koo baju mai baithakar new market chale Aai vo bahoot bara shopping complex thaa pahle toh mai or maa(माँ) clothh shop pe pauche waha kafi bhidh thi toh shopkeeper ne Kone pe ek choti tool Diya

mai maa(माँ) koo tool pe baithne koo keh Diya or mai maa(माँ) ki piche khada thaa.

Shopkeeper: Kya dikhau

mai: jeans or ganji
Shopk: Apki
mai: G

shopkeeper ne bahoot Sari jeans or genji dikhaya maa(माँ) thori uncomfortable feel kr Rahi thi jaab mai niche dekha toh

tool kafi choti thi unki hips tool pe adjust nahee horahi thi isliye unki gaand(गाँड़) tool ki piche faili thi isliye maa(माँ) Apni hips koo adjust karke bar bar baith Rahi thi joo kuch hi pal pe fisal jaa Raha thaa mai yeh sab maa(माँ) ki piche khada hokar notice kr Raha thaa

maa(माँ) turant ek blue Jens or ek orrange Genji choice Karli. maira(mera) rang dheema sawla thaa asal pe kaala hi Log dharenge pr Gajender jaisa kaala nahee thaa mai. mai Apni kaka pe gyaa thaa kaka kaa bi Rang maila thaa pr papa or maa(माँ) ki rang Safed thaa

mai shopkeeper se Sari dikhane koo kaha
Shopkeeper : kaisi Sari dikao Apko

mai: maa(माँ) k Liye simple sa sari dijye

maa(माँ) piche murkar mujhse boli Meri sari ki Kya darkar hai ghr pr toh hai beta

shopkeeper: beta Etna shauk se Dera hai Bhabi G Le Lijye ek

mai shopkeeper koo kaha Aap Le Aaiye
simple Sari dikhane koo kaha kyun ki maa(माँ) simple thi unki simple chiz hi Jada pasand thi

mai maa(माँ) k Liye ek Mejenda colour ki sari Choice kiya or maa(माँ) koo dekhne koo kaha

Shopkeeper ne bi Naya model bolkar Sari pack kardi Asal pe maa(माँ) ki bi choice thi

mai maa(माँ) koo toh private koi saman kharid nahee de Sakta kyun ki maa(माँ) se na toh mai free thaa or na maa(माँ) hi uski badhawa deti isliye maa(माँ) koo mai ek Ladies mol pe Le Aya jaha sabun se Lekar orat ki har saman thi

maa(माँ) koo kaha ki muze sabun Leni hai or shave Karne ki machine

mai maa(माँ) koo dekh Raha thaa vo Ajeeb tarika se vo ladies koo dekh Rahi thi Ladies ek toh jorjet ki salwar peheni thi upar se gale pe chunri Dali thi uski body salwar pe uncover thaa jaha maa(माँ) sari k anchal k bawjood Chadar se Apni Doodh dhaki huyi thi

isi se Andaza Laga sakte hai ki Gaon or Sahar ki orat O pe Kya farak hai

Ladies shopkeeper: Kya du Apko bahan G Unhone maa(माँ) se kaha

maa(माँ): mere bete koo sabun or shaving machine Leni hai

mai ek Apni pasand ki shoap Liya or ek machine phir muze yaad Aaya yaha toh Hair remover bi milta hai or maa(माँ) Majboori mai Gajender se mang Rahi thi isliye mai thora maa(माँ) koo privacy Dena chahta thaa shayad maa(माँ) Apni personal chiz Le kyun ki shopkeeper ladies thi

or Meri maujudgi mai maa(माँ) kabhi bi nahee mangegi koi bi privacy orat ki saman

mai washroom ki pucha Ladies shopkeeper se toh Unhone ek Kone pe ishara kiya

meri jaane ki baad

maa(माँ): Aplog koo jijhak nahee hoti Aisi kapde pehen kr rehne pe

Ladies Shopkeeper: Aap Gaon ki haina
maa(माँ): G

L S: Asal pe bahan G yeh hamrai culture ban Gai hai Sahar ki humlog ki boss ki Aisi kapdo ki demand hai nahee toh naukri se nikal denge or yeh city hai yaha Aam baat hai

maa(माँ): chup thi O Aisi baate hai pr yeh india hai koi bides nahee. joo bi hoo maa(माँ) Apni bag se sari nikal kr blouse ki puchi toh

Ladies Shopkeeper : Haa milegi majenda. Aap ki body Kya hai

maa(माँ): muze nahee pata

Ladies shopkeeper: Apni Chadar kholiye

maa(माँ) ne Apni Chadar kholi toh sari k upar se hi Ladies shopkeeper Andaza Laga baithi

Ladies Shopkeeper: yeh Lijye 38 Apki sahi hongi bahan G

maa(माँ): thori badi Dena kyun ki mai badi blouse pehenti Hoon

Ladies shopkeeper: humlog ki kaam yahi hai har kisam ki bra sell karke Aab map Leni ki jarrorat nahee padhti
Ek najar dekhne se hi Fitting map de dungi

maa(माँ) ne Meri washroom ki taraf dekha or kaha Tum kya remover bechti hoo

Ladies shopkeeper: G or remover pak karke maa(माँ) koo de Diya

maa(माँ) Apni sari k bag pe remover or blouse rakhdi

mai kuch der baad Aaya maa(माँ) koo kaha pata thi k Saab bil online pay kiya jata hai

mai Ladies shopkeeper koo bil Diya or machine se Unhone ek fardi nikalnkar di

mai maa(माँ) koo Lekar Bahar chala Aaya Abhi bi bil nahee dekha thaa

maa(माँ) Aap bi chaliye manglsutraa lene

maa(माँ) : nahee beta muze ghr chor de nahana hai phir Gaon bi chalana hai. vo Kya di tumhari hato pe orat tho

mai: vo maa(माँ) paise dene ki sabud hai. mai maa(माँ) koo nahee bataya ki uspe saman ki item bi likha rehta hai

thik hai maa(माँ) Apko ghr chor deta Hoon. mai maa(माँ) koo ghr chorkar waps Bazar chala Aaya

Aate time mai fardi Apni Jeb se nikalna toh
Likha thaa
1.shoap 40Rs
2.shaver machine 750Rs
3.Blouese (megenda) 250Rs
4. Hair remover 65Rs

4 number koo dekh kr maira(mera) loda sakt hone Laga yeh pehla huya thaa maa(माँ) ki privacy saman dekhkar maira(mera) loda akadne suru kiya. maira(mera) Andaza sahi nikla

mai manglsutraa ki dokan chala gyaa or maching manglsutraa maa(माँ) ki Liye Le Aya

ghr wapas Aya toh batroom ki door khula thaa samag gyaa maa(माँ) naha Li hai. maa(माँ) ki kamre pe gyaa darwaje pe dekhte hi

maa(माँ) Meri dilai majenda Sari pehen kr Apni dono hato se towel pakad kr Apni Lambe Baal jhatka Rahi thi ayese karte time unki chahti Yani Doodh phool Rahi thi

maa(माँ) muze dekhte hi Baal jhatkana band kardi unhe Apni bete k samne chahti phoolana sahi nahee Laga

mai maa(माँ) koo manglsutraa dikhaya toh MiL toh thi pr same nahee thi Dadi se bachne k Liye kafi thi maa(माँ) bi issi baat se saymat thi

mai naha Liya or maa(माँ) ki choice ki blue jeans or Orange genji pehen Liya maa(माँ) ne choka k sath khana ready Karli hum maa(माँ) bete ki sath pe khana khai

thora rest Liye phir nikalne ki time Aaya toh maa(माँ) ki gale pe na manglsutraa dhuk Rahi thi upar se pin Lagakar

Aab toh maa(माँ) muze Awaz di or kahin
maa(माँ): beta yeh pin nahee laag Rahi hai

mai maa(माँ) ki piche khada hokar manglsutraa ki pin Laga Diya. Pin Lagate time mai maa(माँ) ki piche khada thaa unki Lambi Baal koo hatakar pin Lagaya thaa or Baal se yaad Aagaya maa(माँ) ne Aaj Apni GuptAng ki Baal bi kama Liya hai


phir mai maa(माँ) koo Lekar Gaon ki or Rawana huwa..  

mai koi expert to nhi pr apna opinion de raha hu. To koi hurt nhi hona.

Starting kahani pura focus gajendra or shakuntala pr thi jaha tak aapne update delete kiya. kahani uss wakt 90% adultery or 10% incest thi. Jisse yeh saaf pata chalta hain ki agar kahani bich mai stop nhi hoti to 100% guarantee thi ki at the end of kahani shakuntala gajendra ki "slave" ban jati ya yun kahun to "gulam". or ravi "cuckold" hi reh jata.

is kahani k adhiktar viewer's adultery reader's the. mene bi starting k kuch update padh kr iss kahani koo chor dia thaa kyunki mai ek incest reader hu.

halanki jb writer ne poll karwaya ki end mai shakuntala kiski hongi to saayad writer ne bi expect nhi kiya hoga ki yeh ravi ki side jayega, may be is karan kahani stop hoo gyi ya writer kaa kuch personal problem hoo. Haa agar yeh kahani kaa prefix adultery hota to guarantee yeh poll gajendra ki side hota.

Ab writer ne is kahani koo ek tarah se restart kiya hain. halanki abhi tak yeh kahani incest plot se kafi dur hain. Shakuntala ravi ki tabhi hongi jb uske man mai apne bete k liye samarpan ya sohar wala chahat janam lega joo ki muze nhi lagta writer karne wala hain. Gajendra shakuntala koo asani se gulam bna sakta hain chahe jabardasti ya pyaar se. pr ab yeh jabardasti hi hoo sakta hain.

Writer khud yeh information de raha hain ki wrong koo rokne k liye ravi bi wrong kr raha hain. Isse se yeh kaha jaa sakta hain writer shakuntala koo kabhi bi ravi kaa nhi karega(yeh maira(mera) khyaal hain baki writer jane).

Adultery Viewer's ki demand yahi hain ki gajendra or shakuntala k beech chudai(sex) hoo or incest viewer's ki demand hain ravi x shakuntala. Jaha tak mene dekha hain writer adultery viewer's se jyada influence hota hain(personal opinion ).

To conclusion kuch is tarah hain, chahe koi tragedy ya mind game hoo dono mai result bahoot had tak aisa hona

1. Shakuntala kisi ki bi nhi hongi or jaisa kahani kaa title hain "phir usi ne wapas... (muze jail mai daal diya ) " or gajendra koo bi sabak kuch na kuch mil jayega ya vo bi jail chala jayega ravi k saath. saayad shakuntala wapas apne sohar k saath rehne lagegi ya joo usne galti ki hain uske liye vo khud apne sohar koo chor degi ya sohar ise chor dega.


2.Gajendra or shakuntala kaa ek ya do baar chudai(sex) encounter hoga or ravi cuckold reh jayega. phir ravi is kaa badla gajendra se lega ya uske family se or shakuntala apne family k saath wapas rahne lagegi khushi khushi ya dukhi pata nhi. bahoot chance hain gajendra shakuntala kaa r*p* ya blackmail kr chodega.

yeh thaa maira(mera) personal opinion, pr muze aisa kahin se bh inhi lag raha ki ravi or shakuntala k bich kuch hoga jiske liye muze bura jarur lagega.

As a reader only I hope ki writer gajendra or shakuntala k bich kuch na karaye or shakuntala ravi ki hoo jaye.

Please writer try to end the kahani with ravi x shakuntala .

Baki aapki kahani hain joo chahe vo kare kyunki yeh bss ek fantasy hain. ☺  

abhi k tamam sthithi(condition) shakuntala koo gajendar se nafrat koo badhawa de rahe hai... zahir hai vo pahle se ek sanskaari orat thee joo sohar k alawa paraye mard k saath aisi kisi sthithi(condition) kee kalpana nahin kr shakti thee... halanki zindagi ne jis tarah se mor lee kya kahe... shakuntala chah k bi sara sach apne bete koo nahin bata shakti... ek toh aisi baate koi maa(माँ) apne bete se nahin karti hai or doosri kese kahe kee usne bi saath diya thaa ek paraye mard koo apne badan koo haath lagane koo chahe vo shaadi puri tarah se nahin mana thaa...

or ab mandir mai shaadi waali baat bi unhone chhupaya hai... or yeh baat ravi bi nahin janta hai... saayad yahee galti hoo jaye... ab gajendra toh khud bi kameena hai bhala kese vo itni aasani se haath se jaane de... kuchh khabre toh vo bi rakhta hoga... or zahir hai agar jara si bi bhanak lagi toh vo apna khel badal dega.... agar usse pata chali kee shakuntala ab chahat se haath na aane waali toh majboor karega... or fir yeh kabtak virodh karti rahegi pahle majboor baad mai manjoor....

sarrer hi hai kab tak heart(Dil) kee sunegi jb deemag kee sunna shuru karegi toh jahir hai sahi wrong shab tak pe hawas jb deemag pe chadhega... bhale hi baad mai glani hoo ya fir na bi hoo.... keh nahin shakte hai orat k andar kya chalta hai... har stree ya purush k andar ek dabi huyi bhawna hoti hai jisse ek baar bahar nikalne pr vo veeg se bhagta hai...

ravi kitni bi tikram laga le halanki mandir mai shaadi k baad toh puri tarah se vo bewi ban jayegi tab kese rok payegi khud koo or gajendar k sawalo kaa kya jawab degi... yeh baat bi nahin batayee hai shakuntala ne abhi tak...

waise ravi kaa rang apne dad or maa(माँ) pe na jaa k kaka pe kese chala gyaa.... sanskaari shakuntala ne kaheen kaka koo toh apne sanskar na dikha diye the pahle hi....